MY writing goals

writing goals.

Add detail that tells the reader: how, when and where.

Add detail that tells the reader: how, when and where.

to achieve .

do one thing at once because you might get it wrong.

ENDEN PARK

Eden park was amazing because we got to eat  and look  around  and see our bikes.

rocket

We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.

By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.

Here are some ideas to write about:

• rth    
• The MoJupiter
• Astronauts
• Eaon  
• Eclipses
• Stars

My topic is:

space shuutle

You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the time       table where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!

Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

Introduction:
Main idea:	More detail	More detail:
Main idea:is mission	More detail:when shuutel is launched.	More detail: they did 135 mission.
Main idea:34 years of space shuutel.	More detail:there last mission was in 2011.	More detail: the frist mission was in 1981.

Success Criteria for writing. Click here to see an exemplar of an information report about Mars.

Level 3	Student Targets:	Yes!
Audience and Purpose	Identify my audience and purpose for writing.
Content/Ideas	Write clearly and include all important information.
	Add factual detail to expand my ideas.
Structure: including punctuation and grammar	Use different sentence starters.
	Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that
	Organise my ideas into paragraphs and sequence my ideas so that my writing flows.
	Use subheadings for each new paragraph to tell the reader what it is about
	Check that I am writing in the present tense (for example: the sun is a ball of fire; the stars are shooting through the sky)
	Use a range of punctuation correctly.    (.,?!)
Editing	Identify and correct most spelling errors.
	Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.

    A mission is  when  a shuttel is launched in to  space.They have done 135mission and there frist misson was in 1981 when it was there last misson was in 2011 they stop going to space.

Saturn report

Success Criteria

Clear categories with subtitles	Self	LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction
Use sentences and paragraphs
Use facts to inform the reader
Use different sentence starters
Use VCOP

                                              

                                                  saturn

appearance

         

Saturn has rings that are made out of  ice-cristile and rocks.

size

saturn is the secod largest planetin the solar a system.

my name is Nzsl

This week we been learning some sign language in Flox class. this is the link   to my name in Nzsl

Tan you sign your name?

Iintresting fact

Hi, I'm  Spencer and this is an audio recording about me!!

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0ByG_ZPCQgoS4SUQ4dHVqLXJjUVU&authuser=0

I really like recording  because  it faster then writing